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Chris Patton's avatar

This is incredible. I know I’ve said this before, but your writing style is amazingly beautiful. Way to go! :-)

Jenny Huebner's avatar

It’s okay. I appreciate your thoughts because most of the time my writing doesn’t feel like mine. Sort of disingenuous, like I’m hiding behind a wordplay wall. I always appreciate your comments and I thank you for your continued support.

Chris Patton's avatar

That’s what I love about your writing. It’s authentic and genuine. It also feels like it comes from such power, and that’s captivating. Keep writing. I’m always happy to read your work. We writers have to stick together. 😊 Ok. I’ll shut up now.

Luis Rosa's avatar

So so cool, Blue 😮‍💨

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Thanks Luis! <3

Debdutta Pal's avatar

I'm going to dream exclusively of this poem. 🖤

Jenny Huebner's avatar

I’ll always remember this 🖤. Thank you.

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Woah! Intense and awesome writing 🤓

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Thank you, Alex (:

Just Kayla's avatar

The poem is mean in the best ambivalent way but the art scorches something fierce. I literally might frame it. so talented you are!

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Thank you, Kayla (:

Kastine Wischki's avatar

The people versus

the pervert. The ocean versus the ether.

Elysium. Half human half heaven. Elysium.

Half home half an after. The person versus

the paradigm. I see your soft shadow

around thoughts from open throats

My heart stops, skips, rips apart and begs for more. This is art.

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Thank you, K 🩸

S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

"On ne peut pas aimer et être sage." — François de La Rochefoucauld (French philosopher and writer)

"One cannot love and be wise."

Jenny, François de La Rochefoucauld would agree with you that intense emotion—especially love in its most volatile form—is fundamentally incompatible with rational, measured thought. It is not a gentle, wise affection, but a brutal, beautiful, and deeply unwise obsession. It’s not just a simple flaw in logic…

I will never tire of your writing, my friend.

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Definitely not a simple flaw in logic. Thank you for your thoughts, Sylvia 🕊️

wildflower's avatar

„The harsh is an edible injection but

I’ve tasted fear enough to know it ends

enduring.“

Love this! Fantastic work, Jenny!!

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Thank you very much (:

wildflower's avatar

It was my pleasure reading your poem!!

Jenny Huebner's avatar

I feel genuine kindness in that. Thank you 🖤

Nancy Santos's avatar

“ You look so

pretty with your mouth about to shatter” 🖤💣💣💣🔥

I haven’t even finished this and love it!

Jenny Huebner's avatar

Thank you sis 🖤